Soren's Blade: A Dark Epic Fantasy Tale

The novel is nice up till now however i dislike the mcs charecters The MC HAD NO MONEY BUT STILL BOUGHT JEWELLERY BECAUSE A GIRL RECOMMENDED THE SHOP TO HIM AND THE SHOPKEEPER WAS KIND SO HE DIDNT WANNA UPSET THEM ?!??? LIKE WTF?!! IS THAT LOGICThe mc also gave her his we chat when she asked him because he feared she would get embarrassed if he didn't? I hope the mc has some charecter development and grows a spine

I like the 60 chapters so far and i hope that this novel is chosen again for the trial read.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

How did this trash get picked.Just a waste of time

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

Okay, first things first, I'm no author nor am I an expert but as a reader, the grammatical errors and poor sentence structure leads to me being unable to picture the scene.Even just a quick run through from a fluent English speaker would significantly help, but I feel that without those errors this story will be an interesting read.Also, I am not sure what the terminology used for this us, but stating who is the current speaker, current POV and seperating different characters' speech.For example, instead of a paragraph looking like:"And that's the plan right" "yeah, perfect"it'd probably be much easier to understand like:John anxiously questioned Bill for the nth time, "And that's the plan right?""Yeah yeah," Bill reassured, "it's perfect."And also at the beginning of each perspective change label who is talking:-----John POV-----

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