Erin's character is too self centered I am at chapter 70 and she is behaving like a stubborn rebellious teenager who is also foolish am hoping for some character growth if her
The beginning starts essentially with a rape scene, which turns into a consensual act. Not a good start, at all. Too rapey. Storyline is a little ridiculous, even compared to fantasy storylines in the various choices on this site. Needs work on the scene descriptions.
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