Sinful Obsession

Potentially a good story if the grammatical errors and incomplete sentences are edited. Some parts are draggy and perhaps unnecessary.

Brother just one question does these next novel take place in virtual reality or they are permanently in the game World?

Didn't in some parts it glorified china?

And how is your comment 1 year old even after great reset 😳

I didn't know GooseFive could write this bad. At chapter 50: The MC isn't likable. He even acknowledges that he has bad character and is not charitable. He sometimes reflects on his past as a spoiled young master. Rong Tao, who is trying to court his ex-wife, does seem to be more likable and sincere than the MC. This is a terrible thing. At some point we might be wishing Rong Tao got the cheat system and was the MC. Many important topics like the Fairy Planet and cultivation are poorly explained. I noticed this series has no harem tag. What is the point then? He'll become good friends with Zhen Shiyu? Who would read such garbage.By chapter 100 the scenes containing Di Jiu are boring, he just bickers with an ally. He's always an unwelcome, negative presence to anyone he encounters. I'm more interested in the scenes containing Yu Jue.

This novel will be the best of the best for ever

I remember people gwtting sad because this was dropped, was it not the case now?

i was reading the comments and they say that the translation was uhm not that good , i was really shocked since i didnt notice any bad translations ( maybe i am immune to bad translations lol)

ALSO this is actually really good
i didn't really have lots of expectations from this BUT ITS ACTUALLY REALLY GOOD

MY PURE EYESSSS THEY'RE BURNING

I feel like there at least 2-3 'only' on each chapter