Great story love the concept .. definitely an amateur writer but still good. The biggest problem is translation / editing quality tanks and becomes almost unreadable after free chapters end. it's hard to follow who's doing what at times.
I actually tried to read this novel because of INHUMAN WARLOCK, but it's not that good. why bother give them strength system, i mean he could even kill anyone with ease with his low cultivation without training he just gather qi for a few days he could easily kill someone with higher cultivation. i mean, i understand how lucky he is getting bloodline, ring, necklace, and even mask, from the start. it's like you give him what ever would make him look stronger. AUTHOR you could just gave him some cheat skill or bloodline. why bother give all luck that he could easily pick up a treasure like a cabbage. he could defeat his enemy without training why bother give so much. sigh 😔 I'm disappointed. i really like your other novel.
This book is something else. The universe is extremely well constructed and I can see how it'll turn into an elaborate series. The main character is interesting, despite being a bit overpowered from the start. I'm really curious to see more of it!
As we were walking, he told me about the rule book and that I should read everything and not leave anything out. And how the CEO is a vary busy man, I can only imagine how many hours of sleep he gets sense he has this huge company to keep track of and improve.
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