Auhtor never explains how thing/people look and what artifacts and skills do. Includes names. Can’t even describe what colour it has or how someone looks. ExampleExplains food: Good food. Fr? You make food but only says it’s good? Smh not explaining flavour and taste. Just saying it’s good is enough. Explain how people look:Beautiful woman, tall and strong man. What about Color of the hair and eyes? Nahh just skip that.Explain skills: Strength, speed. Not the name or what it does. Gets a skill? Nah just forget it and never use it. Plot armor hundreds chapters later: Suddenly I remember a skill that I can use.Explaining the detail of the fight: I dodged the attack and the next moment my sword hit his head and he died. Something like that. Or explaining the aftermath.Information about stuff: Misleads information due to the grammar. Power levels suddenly getting swapped by wrong number. Names gets confusing. Jim be careful said Jim . He looks tall and she’s also very cute. Is she female or male? Can and can’t get used wrong all the time. Information dumps is the worst as the auhtor swapped a lot of things.. it makes it really hard to understand.Power up:Nah let all the side characters and villains 2 stages higher than him level up.He levels 1 time up they level 3 times.Also when mc gets new power: Nah just nerf it. Killing rule? Nah just hide it.. 1v1 and he hides it. Not even bother trying it. Rule power: Extremly rare to find. Every side character, villain or random people has it. Really? Just give everyone the power of super elite. Fights: Holds back 24/7. Underestimating enemies all the time.The worst part of this novel is the grammar: Doesn’t improve one bit even after 300+ chapters.
Its a great story and you have a great idea but i couldnt understand what was happening in some of the scenes. So You might wanna improve your english a little.
y mass release without letting us know, and so y make that premium, u fucking assholeof all the things you could have done is to tell us that you were going to go premium, and we would know to drop this book, before and not make us want to read any of your 12 SS chapters
Decent novel. Quite good so far. Author should use “Grammarly” to fix grammatical error. Its free, so use it. Hope the novel will be better. Good luck author.
family cultivation story👍👍👍mc cheat is not too opmy only problem with story so far is author skipping over technicalities... although most people just skip those parts,they are actually part of world building
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