The story does have world building capability but it seems the author possibly is saving that for another story in his “connected universe” of novels. The author does a fairly decent job of providing comic relief and writing characters with a modicum amount of depth and background. The ending seemed rushed with a lot of plot elements just washed over or not resolved. Overall a 3.5-4/5. Not as expansive/great as the Soul Land novels by the same author.
One word. Gold. Funny and crazy mc. A must read from me. Don't waste time reading through the rest of this review and give read! I promise you won't regret it!Great job, author!
Good stuff right here very engaging from the get go and that's what I like! The world and characterss are well made and the writing is pretty good (as far as I'm concerned)All in all it's a good mystery story, keep it up Author!
The story isn't anything special, a guy gets a system and gets points to buy stuff that can help make him strong, like I said nothing special and nothing that hasn't been done a hundred times before. The circumstances the mc finds himself in are almost always forced and dont really flow smoothly or seem like a random occurrence at all. The grammar itself isn't bad at all but the dialogue is also forced and choppy. Overall, it's okay but dont expect something special. I'd expect in the later chapter to it basically turning into some basic cn stuff where the author is constantly making the author characters only talk about how amazing and special the mc is and face slapping that happens because of a forced circumstance.
Leroux shook his head and pushed those thoughts to the back of his head. He stood up and with his hands he pushed the shields away, making all the soldiers with no exception fall down to their butts.
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