Hello everyone, I am proud to start posting this story for the Rising Star II competition, I invite you to immerse yourself in this work which takes the time to evolve its character and also... its little frogsNB : little idiot will have several fellow amphibians and if you are enough to comment regularly you will be able to decide what kind of frog will appear later
Honestly really nice.Besides the grammar errors, and the lack of dialogue (which is made up for by all the infor we're given), it has a really cool start.The author could try mixing all of the background information while advancing the plot though.
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