One of the best novels I have ever read.It's quality is superb and it manages to draw the reader further and further to its characters and world through a special one-of-a-kind allure that is rarely seen on this site or in general.A must read in my opinion and I really recommend for others to read it.Just thought I'd throw my dime in.
An interesting concept, I love the way you tell this book in 3rd person pov, but I sometimes lose track of some of the characters' conversations and thoughts, I had to read it about twice to make sure it was whose sentence or whose thought.
Great novel but I feel the plot development is too fast so pls can you slow it down a notch with a little more in depth development and also when he is giving out techniques and weapons (even though it means nothing to him) he shouldn’t give it out casually they should work for it so that they would know the value of it and also the romance is rushed what the hell is there meeting was by fate and then after that you like each other and she becomes your wife.... Generally the novel is great but the plot feels rushed and isn’t going in depth with the development, it would be a lot better if the author takes his time to build the plot and not rush them... also GET WELL SOON AUTHOR
Interesting premise, Promising start. slightly hard to follow after being thrown by the father. Things started feeling random after that. Couldnt make it through volume 2.Main issue is the plot. grammar and writing could be better but that’s not as important. Question for those who have read further: does it get better? Does it return to the red haired owner girl?
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