Reading this novel like enjoying a nice slow dance 💞 Two geniuses working together and slowly coming closer together. The author is generous by giving us as much factual info as possible while keeping the read fun. Highly recommended💎💖💎💖💎💖💎💖💎💖
kinda interesting idea for a story but the mc is just to much of gotta hide stuff and be a wimp, I read the chapters until now but I'm dropping this it's just too stupid with no development going on just always I'm great but I have to put up with my wife's family to make her happy when she's just a stuck up brat in the end
The action element in this novel is very interesting to read. The author has a style that is quite unique. This makes the story quite different from the many game novels on Webnovel.
I like how the story unfolds so far, although it has a haren label, I find it difficult for him to take another woman, it shows that he loves this woman very much...
Don't mind me, just here for the experience. I wonder if my 140 characters are over yet?Lalalila lalilalalalailalalalallalalalalalalalalallaallaalalalalaalalaallaalalallalalalalalaallalalalalaallalalaallalalalallalaaallalalaallalalalalalaalallaallaallalalaalalallalalala
This novel should have disclaimers for incredible amounts of gore and disturbing content. Obviously, the nature of any literary content is up to the author’s discretion! However, authors should still be responsible enough to put some disclaimers up when they publish such content so that a potential reader can decide for themselves if they want to to read such content. Simply, it should be a simple courtesy.*Disclaimer: Read up to chapter 16.*The plot has a steady pace and that pace is, in all honesty, slow. There are paragraphs that have “jumps of thought” where something is missing, making it difficult to follow. There are already plot holes being only at Chapter 16... Characters personally feel clunky. There are cases where the author is rather obviously using deus ex machina to fix even the simplest plot points; using them in nothing more than just basic human interactions, no less— there isnt even a weak excuse given for absurdity, its just.. there? I’m a naturally curious person who will hold on tightly to bad writing just to learn the plot, a character, some piece of world building, a slightly interesting take on a trope or what not... I want to know more about this world... but I personally won’t pursue reading it.These are my thoughts on this novel. It has more interest in creating scenes of gore and violent action than creating a story- and what I was looking for was the story.
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Nice novel, I guess it will be something one day keep up the good work, and the writing style is simple which is nice for someone who's not good at English like me.
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