A sword and a spear dulewealding? How? A spear requires two hands, did the MC grow a third arm? The spear is a very long weapon, almost always taller than the person using it.
This story is an uncut gem that will surely shine with some polishing...Having your sister suicide is traumatizing and then learning that she was may have been killed must be harsh on our MC but that sets the stage for his future development. Excited to read how the future unfolds for Red..Good work author!
Please DOnt ... Dont ..... Dont Make the MC way too overpowered way too Soon .... And try too add innocent LOve interests .... The less bitchs the better .... No simps ... and a bit serious if possible .. You’ve picked a good subject though ❤️
This is such a lovely (epic) story so far 🌸. The author does an amazing job expressing the main character’s feelings through both the dialogue and narration.Rowan is such a sweet soul, and as I read more about him and his actions, my heart continues to flutter!! And the moment the ML was introduced, I couldn’t contain myself 🤩! I was so excited!!Rowans chemistry with the ML is IT, so attractive, clever, and sweet, as I’ve mentioned. I’m so excited to see how this pair will continue on in such a fantasy world. Both characters have suffered in the past, so I’m hoping they can be each other’s remedy 🥰.
<p>Grimacing, he shook his head and glanced at the guy across from him, whose eyes were rolling around, his mouth making faint hissing sounds, unable to speak.</p>
The young lady leads the way to the second floor where all the rooms are. On the way I glance at all the people eating and drinking happily chatting through the night.
She wasn't strapped for cash yet, since she'd used the money she'd earned wisely and made some investments and bought stocks and bonds. Thankfully, her sacrifice of not splurging on food and clothes over the years seemed to have paid off.
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