While this novel is great so far, where the hell did the translator go? I feel like I have ants in my pants from all the waiting. In cases like this I really wish we could be given some notice.
Needs a tonne of work, props to the author and I wish him/her the best of luck.I must say, the first chapter was imho, freaking terrible. It was all over the place, nonsensical mish mash of all the best stuff someone could think of for a modern day mc slapped together into an abomination called Michael.I seriously could not bring myself to read another chapter, I dont say this to discourage the author, it's hard to write! I understand that it isn't easy. This book needs some serious editing and the author needs to just sit and relax a bit, your mc never has to be the everything guy! The best things about characters in novels arent their perfections but their imperfections! All their flaws make them come alive and make your readers empathise with them through their journey! The best thing you can do for your audience is to make them always think about the qualities of our creations that resonate with them! Connecting with them makes your story stand out from the rest of the monotonous garbage that litters this app. You should (If you haven't already but suggesting by the hazardous writing that feels like its come straight from your head to being published) brain storm ideas, the direction you want to go, important antagonists and/or ideas for ones to come! Major turning points in your story that will affect your mc in major ways! These sort of plot points are needed so you can have some sort of direction to love in otherwise it becomes a mess, something that becomes harder to fix the longer you go. Never start the fillings before you've conquered your outline and outlook of where you want your story to go! You may not read this but I seriously hope this helps if you do kind regards
Gotta touch 'em all, Beast Masters! This is what I gathered from the free chapters. The MC somehow ends up as Bai Qi, a Mechanical Engineer student, with an Evolution Egg as his isekai perk. What does it do? He was clueless until he figured out what triggered it. What triggers it? Again, gotta touch 'em all! I just feel so bad for the poor Husky though T-T Maybe I'll find out what happens to it later down the line when I decide to open up more chapters.
The Sphinx wasted no time and leaped forward. Brandishing his claw, he swiped at Leo with the laws of fire. The orange flames encircled the claw, and Leo could feel the heat coming towards him.
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