At chapter 0352 the story makes a huge unexplained time jump. It’s so not in alignment with the tone of the last chapter that it comes off as though there are a bunch of chapters missing in between. I stuck around until that happened. I wish I hadn’t. This is absolutely a cash grab situation.
When I read a novel, I like to become engrossed in the story and immersed in it, the constant use of "chickie nuggies" in the beginning completely destroys the immersion for me. It is overused to the point of becoming annoying. Another issue is that the world seems completely static without the MC. I.e First encounter of a boar & cultivator. They had been dead for days, but no predator in a spirit beast forest approached for a free meal. Only a mouse appeared when the MC arrived. The second encounter caused a large explosion which uprooted trees and either killed everything within 10km radius or caused it to flee out of range, when he is only 20km from a large city hosting 6 million people of which 30% are cultivators. Yet no one finds this strange and comes to investigate what happened... Not even during the 7 days in which the MC passes out beside the crater. An explosion of that magnitude would easily be heard by every person within 50km. The concept seems interesting and the writing quality is not terrible, but it feels like an insane mode test of willpower to make it past the first 20 chapters to see if things start to get better.
This is not my problem!!!my problem is when i was in school i supported the debate "Education is more important than money". Dear money, I am sorry please forgive me, I was just small kid
This is awesome, the theme of revenge really piqued my interest and the grammar really good. The story pace is slow but every chap that I read makes me want to continue.
this story isn't half bad but he really needs to start training his sister's he's already mad some big enemies he's just pick they haven't gone after his sister's to get to him
The story had a lot of potential but unfortunately its been ruined. The author tried making the conversations smart, sassy, funny and mature but he totally overdid it. Many conversations are stretched out for no reason as well.
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