For y’all asking if the novel is still ongoing. Well, the story is completed with a total of 110 chapters + epilogue. The current translations are lagging behind, so hopefully we will get a mass release in the near future, fingers are crossed🤞.
I read all chapters even the mtl ones and i have to say this is second best naruto fanfic with wind one being first, first 50 chapters were kinda slow and i wanted to quit few times but after 100 it gets better until around 400 author starts to stall he writes unnecessary chapters but it passes quickly and even though there are quite few chapters that arent needed there arent a lot,fights are bad expect first few where mc is weak all others his enemies have plot armor ones he was as strong as first hokage and went to kill someone at kage level but couldnt and almsot died like what madara was playing with them and mc nothing and there are few more examples of enemies having plot armor and mc doesnt feel like he gets stronger at all even thought technicly he does it doesnt feel like it, plus there are few things that are major to the plot 2 i noticed 5 sand kage was erased? like author forgot and went back and ice dragon thing was forgoten even by obito who was watching like what the end
The story line is basic bones, filled in with repeatedly regurgitated prose that is often confusing and grammatically incorrect. More effort could have gone into the characters. The author has a great base but purple prose does not a good story make. I paid for the whole thing before reading based
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