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<p>Every bitter word thrown at him</p>

For now, I shall tolerate his antics.

The girl stopped in her tracks and slowly turned around, her head hung in shame. Yu Yan clicked her tongue, while thinking of a suitable punishment. The look in the children's eyes could only be described so pure fear. Suddenly, a worthy idea lit in her head. Yu Yan smirked, raising her eyes to meet the children but no one dared challenge her.

Dengan tegas ibunya menjawab, "Tidak boleh!" Si anak merasa heran lalu mengganti jawabannya.

I had to change my review. the mc's personality is way too inconsistent for my liking , he came off as a pretty cool-headed and intelligent guy , then he just turned into an incompetent child out of no where , who forgets they have a rifle in the apocalypse? he creates games but doesn't know to aim for the head when fighting a zombie ? Secondly, the power-scaling is incredibly vague , he's killing zombies ( who have regenerative abilities for whatever reason) and it's not showing any indication of his strength gains other than his rank in the world rankings. his overall prowess is hard to judge.

I REALLY LOVE SYSTEM GENRES BUT ROMANCE NOT SO MUCH BUT THIS NOVEL REALLY HOOKED ME UP, EVERYTHING HAVE READ SO FAR SO FAR IS OF GOOD QUALITY , CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. GOOD JOB AUTHOR

"When Pride Meets" swept me off my feet with its well-rounded characters and emotional depth. The chemistry between Ethan and Emily is palpable, and the witty dialogue kept me hooked. A must-read for romance fans!"

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