Revenge

''Freya?'' her voice brought upon a chill that was a polar opposite to her righteous appearance. She watched impassively as the shadow branched out from the dark corner before it sprouted upwards

can I keep the other wishes"

" Soon, wait a little longer, I've been so bored with her lately, she doesn't want to do it with me, unlike you. You always do a good performance whenever I need you." answered the man.

After that the old man left. In only a second he was gone and not a trace was left.

"Simple just follow me and serve under me. Become my servant for one year and I will save your uncle" Fang Aoman said with a wide smile on his lips.

Crime novels are generally very interesting. This one does not lack in the least. The grammar needs a bit of work though. Overall, thumbs up to the author.