Okay I’m do love this story in some ways but holy I’m so sick of this writer, he’s bad at storytelling.. constantly repeating and making EVERY single thing longer.. like he’ll show new skills and full out explain in detail about it, not once but everytime and with every single thing..
the amount of stuff I skip/skim over is getting more and more.. maybe 2 paragraphs of every chapter are needed, he just adds unnecessary words it’s getting so annoying
Im currently at ch480ish but I’m about to drop it.. this guy just doesn’t care about the story anymore and wants to make a porno.. also including more lolis (legit little kids).. technically only 1 girl is over 20yrs old..
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the amount of stuff I skip/skim over is getting more and more.. maybe 2 paragraphs of every chapter are needed, he just adds unnecessary words it’s getting so annoying
Im currently at ch480ish but I’m about to drop it.. this guy just doesn’t care about the story anymore and wants to make a porno.. also including more lolis (legit little kids).. technically only 1 girl is over 20yrs old..