I like that the ML isn’t a sadistic a**hole, and that the FL isn’t weak, but the storyline goes a little overboard - more character development would have been better.
Hye there! I liked the story but your plot isn't new I have read some stories with the plot so I can tell that you have mixed them and made a new one. Just one suggestion don't stretch unnecessarily. That way the story will lose its charm. There are some errors in your story but overall it's good.
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