Ragnarök : Guardians

This is one of the worst stories I've ever started to read. The idea of returning back in time and make changes while not new is at least one not so overused like isekai. Nevertheless what could become an interesting story is ruined by bad grammar and bad characters. The story is almost unreadable,  I mean if you publish a story, at least use free programs like Grammarly which would make the story at least readable. This is worse then a MTL chinese novel and that means something. While the idea of bringing new developments into ancient times is good, you need to show how that happens. But in this story there is this 5 year old boy who asks his parents for beetroots on day one and on day two has produced sugar and alcohol. I mean how? It's not how that works. It should at least be believable.

L'amore e l'inganno sono perfetti e anche se l'autore ha un'ampia comprensione dell'italiano, ci sono alcuni confusi con la fantasia. Ma la storia è molto bella. Buon lavoroOverall, good job! 👍

After Reading Top Tier Providence, I found this story quite trashy. I mean ya'know what I mean, and I don't know what was the first created cause I'm not qidian peeps.

Quite an enjoyable read - i've had enough of the 53453th cultivation novel thats exactly the same with different names.At least as far as i read it seems to be different though so i'd like the translation to get continued.

Tbh i enjoy harrm novels but Not novels where the mc just thinks with his dong. Our mc gets betrayed by his closest brothers and actual brother who tells him his harem of wives all cucked him and his First thought in class is to add his fucking Teacher to his harem not even prepare from The Apocalypse thats about to happen. fck this shit man, this mc is worse than a fucking animal at least animals think about survival before trying fck eachother

I have to say, this system is kinda funny sometimes, you can improve more than what you are doing. there are shorts chapters but I feel That you mean by doing so. Keep doing a good job my dear!

I really like writing style of the book. The author is very talented and shows a lot of potential. The story line is pretty interesting as well! I would actually say it’s better than some contracted stories on this app. Finding hidden talents on this app is always great :)

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