Anyone else struggling with this? I feel like its got good bones but everything feels. . . choppy and robotic. . . like sometimes i feel like i have no idea whats going on, the incessant need to use different names for one person even when theres only a single person seems over used and redundant to the point where you feel like they are talking about multiple people instead of one. . . the FL is robotic and even though she says she likes him it seems more like shes thinking about everything too clinically and cold, like shes dissecting the relationship and how it should be like shes trying to do it all locigally instead of emotionally. . .
The first hundreds chapters are bad, like really bad. He was a simp, and it made me cringe every time he talked to his teacher, and he treated her like private property. It was frustrating, but after that it got better. Turn you brain off for a while and you can enjoy this.
Edit: the conflict between Belinda and the mercenaries made no sense. She could just resolve it with money, she could clearly see that they were outnumbered. But no, just had to make unnecessary drama, she was evil not dumb.
A really good novel. The only downside I can say is the massive info dumps for unrelated topics. So far I don't know if the information given will become relevant later on.
A really good read for those who like level system novels in VR that give the MC real live benefits.
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Edit: the conflict between Belinda and the mercenaries made no sense. She could just resolve it with money, she could clearly see that they were outnumbered. But no, just had to make unnecessary drama, she was evil not dumb.
A really good read for those who like level system novels in VR that give the MC real live benefits.