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  1. HarleyDB
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    " Right now is not the time for a joke or argues. Just stop..." Merry said angrily.
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    Yuuichi: "I guess it is true.. villains do to long speeches... But why are you telling me this?..
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    Quite the good story and the characters and their interactions and growth are pretty much the highlights. From what I could read I would reckon the story is about disruption, about how the protagonist's mere existence and knowledge can have a profound effect on the world he's been transmigrated to. The author's take on a world where magic exists and it's implications for human society is one of the most realistic depictions of it. Basically a society where magical eugenics is the overarching influence on all walks of life and how extremely rigid and hierarchical the divide between classes. Although the world building is not up to par with only a few snippets and descriptions of the world's history, cultures and races which doesn't leave a lot in feeling immersed to the setting. Though I assume the author will mitigate it when we reach the kingdom building arc hopefully. The writing and structure of the story are good with the rare spelling and grammar mistakes. Names, places and terms are consistent although some of the chapters are mostly dominated by the perspective of a single character. But they are written where it's clear who's talking and who's who so you don't really get confused from the dialogue. The technical aspects of the magic system being described are easy to understand and also the scientific concepts being applied are also clear.So far it's been a marvelous experience to read it and I can't wait for the succeeding chapters. And how the protagonist carries himself into this new world. Thank you author for bringing your story to life and I hope you continue writing this until the end.
  1. JayModii
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    august and gel, probably.......also very nice story building

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