Quick Transmigration: He Likes Being a Father

Name: Ray Vera

The moment she says that, a huge magic circle shone where she is currently standing, and a lot of books suddenly projected like holograms in different colors appeared and floating around her.

I will write spoilers."This novel overly imposes equality of strength between Jiang Chengxuan and his wife, Shen Ruyan.In the early chapters, during their cultivation in the Foundation Establishment Realm and Violet Palace Realm, it's understandable if Shen Ruyan is stronger than her husband due to her advantages from her previous life.However, after reaching the Golden Core Realm where Jiang Chengxuan condensed a level 11 golden core while Shen Ruyan only condensed a level 9 golden core, the author insists that they are equally strong, especially in the chapter where both reach the sixth stage of the Golden Core Realm. The author claims that Jiang Chengxuan can defeat a cultivator of the False Newly Born Soul Realm, and so can Shen Ruyan!Where is the logic in this?Jiang Chengxuan possesses many powerful Dharma treasures, while Shen Ruyan has only one. Additionally, Jiang Chengxuan has developed numerous and stronger divine abilities compared to Shen Ruyan.So, where does their equal strength come from?Truly, the author seems to lack understanding."

I was very respectful and careful in my assessment of your story. I had only gotten to either 18 or 20 some chapters in your story before I decided that it was not my cup of tea. the world background was very detailed and contained a lot of explanation which I enjoyed. as for the updating stability I cannot accurately give a rating as I have not personally received an update; for I have only started reading the story recently. your character design is very in-depth, although I did not really get to experience that much of the character I really enjoyed the story. for the story development I gave the highest rating possible for the length of time that I read your story. the writing quality leaves a little bit to be desired as I can easily tell that English is not your first language, or it is your first language and you're just having trouble like me in using grammar. either way it was very entertaining and I looked forward to more stories from you.

I read the description, and the premise seems pretty interesting. I will give it a try, thank you! 😊

Your passion and hard work shine through in every sentence . Bravo 👌👌👌

Pretty good the pacing not too fast or slow The POV idea is pretty unique