Prisoner From The Past

DING!

"No!" Robin calls out, grappling to the nearest light pole then flipping to get to the next and land before the surface level of the WayneTech facility. A hole eaten through the double doors.

Its an ok novel, however the MC is just so unlikeable and foolish to the extent you just want to shake him and say Think you freaking fool.His decisions are based on his original pathetic persona and everything forward is just rehashing the earlier chapters. A smart MC could use his new system in many ways, even establishing, dare I say, a harem. Get the affections to 95 then enjoy the rewards they are willing to offer in all facets. He had been dealt a harsh reality check but his not comprehending this is really depressing.Overall, it isnt much fun, there is no joy being seen and, I keep harping on it, the guy is a f*#king loser, just wondering if he swings the other way as he hasn’t thought once about bedding them.Unless the story narrative changes I recommend a pass on this novel, you will only end up being annoyed. Mind you if you are already a forelorn simp then have at it.

Writing is good but you need to introduce more characters it's already been 17 chapters and I hope you do something new in the next chapters and ofcrse i wish u good luck keep up

Really great book. Even though it's a newbie now, I know it'll do great. I like the use of words and stuffs.  The descriptions of emotions really draws me In. Keep it up author.

Hey everyone,Writing Glitched Reality: Rise of the Tamer has been a journey, and I won’t lie—it’s been tough. I had big plans for the story, but along the way, I’ve realized that things don’t always go as expected. This is my first novel, so I’m learning, improving, and figuring things out as I go.Right now, engagement is low, and I know that. But I also know that every great story takes time to find its audience. I’m not giving up just because things are slow. Even if only a few people read it, I’ll keep pushing forward.If you’re reading this, I appreciate you. And if you’re enjoying the story, let me know—it means more than you think. I want to see the respond whether people are liking this story or not. So if u think there is any problem pls send a review so I can improve it and make these journey more enjoyable.

I can't explain but I think 3,8 is good one for it and I well see if you can make me up it to 4