Stopped at ch.113
there are many good points, namely the quality of writing, the configuration of the world, the game system.
among the problems there are the secondary characters (mark) who are just unbearable, the romance which is slowly built and which just has no place and worst of all, MC.
Even though I loved MC at first she's stupid. completely and utterly stupid. It makes you wonder how such a person can be a 36 year old mother.
there's also the fact that EVERY D*MN CHARACTER STUTTERS IN EVERY D*MN PARAGRAPH!
I would say give it a try if you don't have anything better to read and see if you like it, if you can tolerate the flaws it could be a good novel with lots of chapters.
This is what you call a sword moron. The idea that everything has to be solved head on and only with a sword. He practice boxing for years and still hasn't figured out that if you can't block an attack, get the fuck out of the way. A quick and sudden dodge and then a sword strike, holy shit, we're talking profound, end of the book type sword skill here. Dumbass.....if you're gonna wield a sword, learn sword play along with techniques.
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there are many good points, namely the quality of writing, the configuration of the world, the game system.
among the problems there are the secondary characters (mark) who are just unbearable, the romance which is slowly built and which just has no place and worst of all, MC.
Even though I loved MC at first she's stupid. completely and utterly stupid. It makes you wonder how such a person can be a 36 year old mother.
there's also the fact that EVERY D*MN CHARACTER STUTTERS IN EVERY D*MN PARAGRAPH!
I would say give it a try if you don't have anything better to read and see if you like it, if you can tolerate the flaws it could be a good novel with lots of chapters.