It's an amazing story and I have been following for a long time. But recently it's been getting reaaaaallly slow paced. I think I will really have to go now and come back later to binge read . π’ π’
Yeah, I mean...... Yes? No? This novel is really a fifty fifty. Kingdom building novel where the mc has the ability to teleport to one world to the other. Like the sypnosis said the mc will be given the city without having to pay tribute.So that means he is independant basically. So MC uses modern items to trade for money and uses that to build his own city for now.In the 40 chapters he already fought several wars, albeit lackluster explained it really shows mc's retardness. I mean, how the f*ck? This guy really thinks that if he equiped (only about 1 month?) trained soldiers with advanced weapons like crossbows and better quality swords and catapults he can defeat someone's seasoned soldiers with number advantage?Oh guess what? Of course he won! Like he got confidence defeating unorgansized bandits he think he can win against well trained armies? Just because he has better equipment? What, even his soldiers can adapt into modern formations? (In one month and even less).And there's no explanation how he even got his weapons from the modern world, no interaction with the modern world at all!Oh, forgot to say he's a huge f*cking hypocrite, or you could say the author is one cuz in this world there exist demi-humans. So mc accepts refugees and there are demi-humans mixed in with them. Well, he says he will give them equal rights but no, the demi-humans apparantly got less than normal humans. Wow, you change your damn mind faster than I beat my meat!Translation - 5* (Smooth like the hands in my freezer~)SoU - 5* (trial reads, always 5 stars)Story development - 3* (I don;t know how to explain this, read it yourself)Character design - 1* (Overconfident mc with retarded thinking)World background - 3* (demi-humans and medieval technology/era)Overall score 3.4
Please re upload the old chapters on a different site at leastπ₯Ί I really loved this story π₯Ίππ»ππ»ππ»π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«π«
it's fanfic but is placed in novel section with chapter 29 onwards locked and writing quality is horrible it's really cliche novel with Chinese vibes of face slapping overall trash
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
I enjoy this outbreak idea, really timely. And then there's an evil businessman, a miraculous prophet, and some nosy media men. I love how the plot thickens. Good job! β€οΈβ€οΈπβ€οΈπβ€οΈπβ€οΈ
chapters too short. world is decent story is developing well can't say much about updating stability with how new it is. character design is devent. honestly i do have some bias but im trying to be as genuine as posible.
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