Author is a disgusting pedo who gets off to sleeping with 13 year olds. The soccer part is great but it's very much destroyed by the authors raging hard on for an adolescent child .
Read the raws, it's great from Chapters 1 through 100, pretty good from Chapters 101 to 160, frustrating from Chapters 161 to 250, Chapters 251 to 300 were so bad I had to skim through them because of how the author started to rush the story (I was too invested and had to see how it all plays out), Chapters 301 to the end were trash because the author rushed the ending, made all the build up pointless, and scrapped the entire premise of the novel. So much wasted potential for both the story, characters, and system. The author littered the novel with racism and nationalism to an insane degree, made horrible character decisions, and ruined the novel. A waste of my time and braincells, I'm going to pretend everything past Chapter 160 never happened.
I like the story so far but the person translating it has been splitting single chapters and making it into multiple chapters. reading the raw you can see that where chapter 35 on here is it would actually be chapter 25 im the raw.
The story is amazing and the narration is like the cherry on top-sweet, simple and in a non-hurried manner, which makes it a smooth read. The reader can instantly connect with the characters and their feelings, thanks to your narration. There are some mistakes- grammatical and omission of words. Also, often you use a particular word twice, sometimes in different context and other time in the same. These interrupts the flow and gives a kind of escape route to stop reading further. Apart from that, the plot, the character's development, the narration everything is awesome.
Real trash the main character acts like a badass in real life but is the definition of beta male in game. I donβt know about anyone else but that sounds retarded and backwards but for some reason the author wrote it this way. If you dislike novels where the mc is thrown around by women and acts like nothing bad is happening then this novel is for you if not donβt bother. The worst part about it though is that in the beginning the mc seemed like a badass but 15 chapters in he becomes more of a pussy who does what every a women tells him like the mc from super gene.
If you are looking for a novel to read try Plague Doctor in the trial read. Its a genuinely good novel with no young master face slapping Bs. With good plot progression and actual character's with depth to them. And a lot of mystery.
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