Phoenix Ascending

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"Old man who are you" said Nathan

The author has a unique approach on the story as he switches perspective between engaging with the readers and strorytelling. In fact, it was rather immersive— that is until cut scenes of information jump into the picture and leaves one lamenting the sudden disruption! Some people might think, I don’t like info dumb, and straight up quit from reading… Well, don’t quit just yet! The story has got potential in it (coming from someone who read a very populare novel with a similar theme.)

I think the concept itself isn't noteworthy, but the execution is pretty decent so far and the writing is also solid enough.the problem i have with this novel is that the dialogue is kinda..flat. it lacks the punch, because athe uthor doesn't add subtext or description on how they feeling which will benefits it by adding more emotions.overall decent start