Great job! Loved reading it! Can't wait for the next part! The queen is really awesome in the story. She's the best character. She's super strong, smart, and kind. Every time she's there, the story gets better. She's really good at solving problems and she's always nice to everyone. The way she acts is really cool. She talks to others nicely and helps them when they need it. She's the most important person in the story. I'm excited to see what happens next and how she keeps helping everyone. The person who wrote the story did a great job making her. I'm looking forward to reading more about the queen in the next parts!
I absolutely love it but I hate some of the characters especially the ladies.like what the hell , can’t the mc just one girl following him around.this ain’t a harem novel.and I absolutely hate the girl yua.she just sees the mc at the and just start blushing.and waste of all roan ends up taking her home.this is a great novel but please specify coz some of us don’t like clingy people
A good start to a story. It needs more chapters to be a great story. A good plot so far. I like the idea of a orc main character it is a idea that is not often used but has alot of potential to be a really good story.
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