Here is my honest and detailed review:Personal opinion: This book is unique and I recommend it to everyone who likes to read about magic. I can already see character development in the future, unique magic spells and a lot more. This book is speaking to me. Telling me details without even reading about them. It's amazing. Writing Quality: I'm hungarian so I can't tell much.... That's what I would say about average novels with good writing style, but this novel is unique. Even I can tell that the writing quality is good. The author knows his/her way with the words. Story Development: A very good paced story. This is almost like magic to me. As if the author had all the time in the world to think about the story. Only 14 chapters and a lot of things happened, yet the story is not rushed at all. Character Design: It's really colorful. Author gave us almost enough character details. We can imagine the characters, but we can also depend on our minds. Every significant character got a personality here. Update Stability: Currently 7/week. Not the best, but it's not bad either. The novel is good so I'm already thankful.World Background: I can't say much about this one. It's interesting, a mix of imagination and real world. It's a bit hard to explain. Read the novel and you will understand. I won't say much because the novel only started 2 weeks ago.(Currently only 14 chapters. This an early review. I hope the author keeps up the good work. Also, I hope this review helped you understand a bit more about this novel.)
It begins alright. the first few chapter start explaini.HE IS GETTING BLACKMAILED. BY A GIRL, WITH NO RELATION TO HIM WHATSOEVER, BECAUS HER MONKEY LIKES HIM. SHE THREATENS TO TELL HER FRIENDS. HE GIVES IN????? HE ACTUALLY GIVES IN, AND IS BASICALLY HER SERVANT LIKE WTF NO. very poor character development and the cliches are unbearable. Cultivation system changes constantly, he wasnt that strong at all in his previous life. he was supposed to be top tier, but he nows bumps into stronger people all the time. And very strong was supposed to be about 5th level, but he bumps in the first chapters in the girl thats blackmailing him, where her bets are basically lvl 9 pills, and treats them as common stuff. Recycling old novel stuff. not worth it. dont read,
It's a great book i enjoy writing and hope you all enjoy reading, there are some parts that i probably messed up on but if you see any just call me out on it and it'll get fixed or explains. As the author, i also don't mind giving myself full marks >=D
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The story has great potential.... It will become a good story in no times... Keep writing till the end .... There is some grammatical error, I hope you can pay attention to that sector too, as it helps with the quality of story.
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