I want to see Vikings conquering the world. Obviously using science from modern world. Not ignorance and stakes. Awe science! Death to cannibal pedophiles.
The character development is fantastic giving a feeling of realism and connection to them. The world building has many intricate elements to it and it all fits in nicely making sense and holding relativity. This novel is amazing, i only wish the updates where more consistent so I could read more.
Mc has no motive to do anything, making it hard to invest in the story or conflict. Mc would rather be sleeping. systems with personalities are double-edged swords. If done right, it can enhance if wrong it can hurt,but the system can't be the only driving force of the Mc growth.
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