Otherworlder Travel Diary

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

The storyline really started off great, but felt the author lost the line of thought completely after the Governor was brought down. The title and where the story is at has no connection at all, except for the first few chapters. I got all the more disappointed after the incident where Dr Jeffrey got injured, 6-8 chapters were posted completely irrelevant to this book, new characters, new storyline, god save the readers!!! And then after multiple comments the author started posting the story related to Jeff but again reading it brought no sense to the story.. days to weeks to years in one chapter and then goes back to another character, that character moves from days to weeks to years.. read the last few chapters posted on October 30, every single chapter has paragraphs to paragraphs repeated only difference being the character is different. I started reading this book because of the authors own review which said she wanted to bring up the issues a lot of women go through, agreed it started that way, but what happened?? There is no end to the revenge she was planning and in the meanwhile a side story started and from being doctors they became Prince & Princess, fine understood, but without any context how can a few days become months and years. A reader reads because of consistency and a move in a story not jumps in a story. I am very disappointed that I even paid for those irrelevant chapters and on top of everything brought privileges..