Veclav and Sharae look towards each other and nod before sprinting after the mob. After linking up they ran together as other people in their doorways made the same preparations, Sharae and Veclav managed to reach one of the stragglers from before Sharae tapped her on the shoulder she turns towards Sharae still running "Hey Jessy, what's the situation?" Jessy slightly sweating "Umm, something about a scab breaking into Alfred's home and he caught scabby in his daughters room"
An interesting story only problem is the gender pronouns mistake over and over again. The error is all over the place, yet I am still interested in the story.
Pretty interesting novel so far - I appreciated how it starts and builds up the 'entity,' slowly giving him character and showing how different he is from people.
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