Review as of chapter 100. So far so great. Really a good world the author has made, and honestly it felt like the intro just ended. very excited to see where this goes keep it up!
It’s not just bad grammar but horrible spelling that makes it seem like you’re losing your brain cells reading it. I understand English is not their first language but yhey can at least put in the effort to search up the correct spelling or invest in a dictionary.
My biggest worry is the MC just being a system slave. Also not very original P.S: FirstFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
Very interesting concept, have been looking for a novel like this since 'Legendary Mechanic' and I hope this work gets picked up so I can support it and the great author!However this is a very small excert of what seems to be a massive story, so anything can happen when considering writing quality, world building and character development.We can just hope this gets picked and supported properly.
Great novel. Had alot of potential,however, I don't like mc that is basically an emotionaless robot. So I am dropping this. But since it had a great start,and many people might still enjoy it, so I will ati give an almost 5star rating.
At present the book is in the nascent stage as only 7 chapters have been published. The plot is good and well presented and progressing well.As regards the stability of updates, these will naturally follow. The Character design is good and so is the world background.The writing quality is OK.All the best, Author!
hey author and new readers seeking to read this novel, I ll give you a pros and cons of the novel. pros :- 1.the plot is interesting, intelligent. to better make yall understand, you can compare the plot type with the type of plot world apocalypse online has and the ancient genes. 2. the power system is unique and author explained it well. easily understandable and exciting. 3. side characters have a proper role and are growing, mc's backing does a proper job of backing him rather than in some novels where mc has to leave cuz he cant bring his backing into trouble. 4.the writing is fun. author has inserted humour in between. and he knows how to hype.cons :- 1. the story is incredibly slow. 2. mc's power development is near negligible. although he has such a good legacy, as you've seen in majority of comments and I ll mention it too, I hv read it to around 350 chps and MC. is. still. VERY. weak. Unlike WAO and the ancient genes, mc's power development is too slow, even this far into story he is just on 2nd level of the whole power system. at almost every big fight you ll see him say I am weak I am weak and still not do anything to improve it. you ll see him berate himself as being weak almost throughout the story, I admit his origins are strong and his system is strong too, but he legit never bothers strengthening himself. 3. there are actions after actions. just like WAO, you ll see yourself exhausted just by reading it due to continuos action.
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