Old Dream

For Millions of Years, his energy had corrupted many creatures. It resulted in the creation of monsters, Archdemon and Archangels, and..............Devil Cultivators, the only beings that could refine the little bit of energy that could escape from the seal.

For this, he didn't make anything. he just grabbed a pencil he made the other time and he then got out of the world.

<p>Were it not for Jianhong's notorious reputation for his insatiable appetite for women, Qin Fuhua would have avoided entangling himself with such a volatile character.</p>

Kelas memang sepi saat jam istirahat, kelasnya berada di lorong paling ujung, jadi tidak banyak orang yang berlalu lalang, Rina mengintip penasaran, apa sih yang mereka obrolin? Sepertinya seru sekali.

Not like I can demand anything... If I want to escape, the first thing I need to do is to get stronger...

The starting of the story is good,  hoping the author would maintain the consistency in upcoming chapters!

So far good. But the fl gave me this in a rush vibe and doesn’t think things through. Like the first 3 chapters she already got punch in the face by her ex boyfriend/mate 😵u200d💫and ml I’m confused about him for now. Might be because there only four chapters for now 🙂but still encourage to read. Makes you want to know how it would develop 😊

I read the first 3 chapters but I introduced myself because this book just isn't for me but anyway you have a review of those first three chapters:The first three chapters of this story lack any real sense of originality, depth, or meaningful conflict. The characters feel more like placeholders, their struggles predictable, and the plot nothing more than a series of events happening without any real emotional investment or tension. The writing is overly reliant on genre clichés without attempting to subvert or innovate. What could have been an intriguing fantasy with a unique protagonist feels instead like a string of uninspired tropes and plot devices designed to move the story along, but never giving the reader a reason to care. If the author is serious about improving this series, a complete overhaul of the characters, pacing, and plot structure is necessary—there’s simply nothing here worth investing in.Anyway, for the author, don't take this review badly but as an example to improve, and I don't want to be too mean to the author so I'm giving it a 4 ⭐ and hope it gets better.

Very good novel so far with a super interesting plot however update stability is not the best, if this had more chapters and not over a week since a new one has dropped this would be the best novel on the app imo.

Love the story...The MC is cute and the plot is exciting. I want to read more about how the FL will interact with the ML when they meet. Hoping for a mass release soon!

I’ve read only a single chapter and I’m in love I hope to grow to love these characters as much as the author clearly loves them the attention to detail is amazing can’t wait to read

The story is beautifully written, it is very immersive and the world building is very interesting. It is a little slow paced at the beginning, but it was worth the wait to Sollivan awakening. Highly recommended, and kudos to the Author 👍