Please have this book proofread/edited by someone whose native language is English. This book has a lot of errors: wrong use of pronouns and genders; repetition; punctuations used incorrectly; incomplete sentences; and mixing first and third person. Also, some transitions were not seamless.
I enjoyed your first book and have been patiently waiting for another. It was worth the wait! This is a fun, well-written story. Characters are developed nicely and no gaps or leaps in the storyline. I'm looking forward to reading more from you!
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