Then the rest of the armed slaves were upon him, stabbing with spears or swinging with club or sword. But though there were many of them, at least seven, none of them could connect a strike to the young man in their midst. Dropping low, Artorius dodged the thrust of a spear and amputated the offender's leg just below the knee, taking his club-wielding compatriot's in the deal. Then he straightened, taking a half-step back to avoid a club aimed at his head and whipping his sword around to block a second, steel club. Shifting forward, Artorius altered the angle of his sword, letting the club skitter along the flat of his blade, the wielder staggering forward- just in time to take a dagger in the shoulder as a stab aimed at Artorius went wide.
[Writing quality {4} + Stability of updates {5} + Character design {4.2} ]:- As they say 'consistency is the key' and author is indeed consistent whether it's about writing quality, updates or keeping characters in their distinct but pre-established character (pun intended), he has done it right. Characters have certain depth and you will come to appreciate it as story further progress [Story development {4.2} + World background{4} ]:- As of ch170 you can expect a fleshed out story development and world background. ##Real Rating=4.1*[*=if removed stability of update criteria]Criticisms:- While reading it Author will be able to somewhat convince you it was planned and despite not seeing off camera characters they are vital to story's progression but it's true only for star characters, many others are forgotten like that old pen fallen somewhere behind tabe only to be discovered later for plot. All in all this is a good read and has potentially everything which needed to be an awesome book to recommend. And we can see it's very early in the development of story so hopefully in future it actualize its potential
Ava's position is really at the bottom, but this is really a mentally draining story 😭, Oh yeah, I'm curious about the continuation, keep up the spirit in making the story, and your writing is really amazing.
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