My Sacrificial Summoning System: I Summoned SSS Grade Baddie

The story idea is really good. It would have been a great novel but names like testa,shuna sounds cringe and word "san" makes the reading unbearable. It's sad that you ruined your story with these elements and I am ignoring the grammatical errors

I read quite a few chapters to come here and write a review. There are a few places where the sounds and the grammar sometimes disturb the flow of reading, other than that, I think this novel is going pretty well. Update consistently and I think this novel has the potential to become something great in the future.

Much, much better than the original book.I've read the OG book all the way to chapter 20 before dropping it.But then, I found path B.And this one, is far, far better.MC, is no longer instantly broken OP.There is actual character development.And the characters, are genuinely likeable.The MC, is pretty reasonable.But, there is enough craziness & randomness, which fits the character mind you, which I genuinely enjoy.If you want a rather unique take on a LITRPG story, I recommend giving this book a try, it's genuinely pretty good.You can see the author has learned immensely from path A, and implemented what he's learned in this novel.Well done!

Souless: The Awakening is unlike anything I’ve read before. The way the world feels both ancient and futuristic, broken yet powerful, gives it this haunting atmosphere that sticks with you. Matte’s journey through the Wastelands and Black Hollow had me completely immersed—the level of detail is just insane.

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