I feel like I'm inside the ocean, the water all around. But something is wrong with it. Me. I am the wrong thing in it. I am not supposed to be in it because I don't belong in its world. I am but a mere visitor that would go up and inhale the air again from outside its domain.
Melissa is a good MC! your writing style is very good. Just a suggestion, maybe break off some of passages that's too long. It'll help readers to focus more. but overall, it's a really good story!!!
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