[Reviewed on: 15-06-2021] *Glimpse of initial chapters.*GOOD POINTS:- Likeable MC- Not extremely poverty stricken, MC has some saving and stuff to support himself- Weak to strong trope is executed well- MC can think, he observes and doesn't go round being bullied physically (verbally, yes)- You don't have to cringe because MC is dumb, because he isn't- Expect beasts, Qi cultivation, maybe realms too, and lots of action- Some realistic elements are also depicted because we spot corruption, injustice, torture, bullying, conspiracies tooWEAKNESS:- The narration style is highly 'telling' rather than 'showing'- Author's omnipresent tone is everywhere, which gave lesser screen and insights to the character- Readable novel, though there are tense fluctuations- Some information is repeated, such as chapter 2 and 3 has repeated info about Meng Yan.
The last and final simp, must my classic the book is good, and it's not gonna suddenly be dropped.I am a new writer and, it's just been 2 weeks that I started, I never wrote anything before this, and in just in these 2 weeks I can feel myself growing as a writer.I hope I continue to grow and I hope people like my work, any complaints you have just post it in chapter comments or write a review
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