I got bored after chapter 350 to 450 the Mc got complacent everything falls into his lap money no problem , skills not problem he gets everthing with no difficulties the fights are also getting boring and mundane no suspense anymore it doesn’t even matter about sword skills anymore it’s about who could make a bigger explosion 💥
I had to stop. your writing is good, but this is just Twilight with different names. I wish I could give you a better rating, but it lacks originality.....I hope you find your own voice, not what you read from others. good luck out there and may you never stop writing!
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