It’s face slapping novel. Seemingly designed to be painfully generic, it does encompasses all the worst parts of the genre. The MC is an insecure brat going on a powertrip, he has a system which gives him everything, and everyone is an autistic narcissist because that’s the only people our MC can “face slap”.If you enjoy the genre then it might tide you over, but it does nothing particularly well and the glacial pace only makes it more difficult to get through (30 shopping chapters in a row).
XDXDXDXD This is the best comedy story I've ever read. It also reminds me of the story called Senior Brother has a big pit in his brain(Or something like that)
Needs work. More time spent fleshing out the storyline while also developing dialogue will greatly reduce how chaotic the novel feels IMO. This may potentially be due to english transation or english not being first language. Only read first 20 chapters and like the premise of OP shield MC. As the author gains experience writing should get better. Cover art is entirely misleading and should be changed ASAP!!! Good luck author i‘m rooting for you!
I actually kinda like this story, even though I am pretty slow reading stuff, story books never failed me and I am proud to say that this is one of the books that I will continue to like in the future. Hope to see more good stuff from you
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