It's a great story that is quickly becoming one of my favorites. Although the grammar was pretty horrendous at the start it has become readable even for someone that is pretty critical towards the later chapters. It has a very good story development and decent writing if you look past the grammar.Overall very enjoyable for me and I think everyone should give it a try. If you can bear with the grammar I think most people will thoroughly enjoy it.
Mc only know is to leech... He cant even makes decision for his self.. Hes weak as hell always beaten by his trainer or monster... Mc only knows how to flirt with his onee-san.. Hes flirting since chap 2 - 40.. I guess that is the fantasy that author dream of for his life... So far this what i know for 40 chaps.. ๐๐ฟ๐๐ฟ๐๐ฟ๐๐ฟ(i dont fvking care for other reviews .. This mine)
I've read it all!!(till chapter 69 hehe)Love it!! Im still waiting for traps though... Pretty big brain idea from the author btw!! A new world with supernatural pp and pus lel
From just the beginning I can already tell that this is going to be a good novel to read and I wish it was a anime or movie but I will be reading about this and this is just the beginning of a new novel
I read through the first three chapters and wow. I love the motive for the main character, as well as his progression so far. I have never read or even heard of a Reincarnation story that has the protagonist actively trying to go back to his old life. Makes for a very fun and entertaining read.
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