This novel is amazing.The characters are interesting, and they will grow deepen in later chapters. Something that was VERY rare in other novels recently.I thought this will be like System based novels that seemed to be popping up every once in a while, and I think that will not stop soon.After the first few chapters, I expected the quality of the story to dropping. It was due to the two MCs, their characters seemed to be hard to be understood.Yet- the Author do not disappoint me at all, the characters really grow, and although they seemed ridiculous (well, maybe they actually are, at least for the Male MC I was almost certain... If not for-) they are good. Really good.In short, like I had said, this novel is AMAZING.Btw, for the volume 1, you can reach the Author in Discord for it. He will give you a free copy.I asked him a few days ago and he gave me one. You can find the link for Discord in the chapters, or synopsis page.
Amazing! Keep it up! You've done a great job! I'm loving the plot and what you have done with the novel. two of my favorite light novels in one fanfiction is the best!
The concept of this story is great. Unfortunately it is really hard to read. First, the grammar. While this isn't too big of an issue and can be corrected by having someone proofread and edit it, after awhile it is just painful. Second, the MC. While I was getting sick of OP MCs who change their entire morals and ethics in the face of their might, this MC is just plain stupid and cowardly. Even after becoming OP, he hasn't the common sense of a gnat nor any increase in confidence. While I know the trauma he has affects him, but I've seen a 5yr get over **** better than him. And finally, the pace and flow of the story can be erratic as hell.I would love to see this story get corrected when the author gains more experience. If it happens I will re-read.
The translation quality is amazing, the stability of the updates is also great...However, the novel itself su.cks, it started well with a martial arts Mc and lots of amazing fighting scenes, but the Mc literally doesn’t approve the slightest bit and Iv’e read over 300 chapters, he’s still weak, always gets pulled in a mess and doesn’t even notice it, in fact, it became a novel that just keeps on talking about 18th century politics and it pisses me off soooo much... The Mc is literally useless, he’s not even an assassin, the name of the novel itself has to change... the story is sooo damn slow at developing that I’m literally thinking of dropping it before becoming crazy..In conclusion, if you love reading novels about pathetic Mc that can’t even control their fate and also don’t try to do so, instead they always get the short end of the stick, also if you want to read a story that literally doesn’t advance in its development, always stick in one place yet full of political useless freaking damn battles, then be my guest.
From the corner of Yumina's vision she could see the civilians all fleeing back into the forest. Fortunately there were only a few brave and women who wanted to see what remained of their homes.
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