This story is good, however, i havent seen any reviews really criticizing anything, so ill have to do it myself.First, the author seems to enjoy wasting time rambling needlessly for chapters on end. A simple trimp from a village to the academy took like 20 chapters for no reason, it could have been handled within 5.Second, i noticed that he attempts to make the MC appear smart in the initial chapters but it just comes across as forced and makes the MC look dumber because his “smarts” are common sense lol (BUT because it was the initial chapters ima let that slide)Third, once again coming back to the authors rambling. Each action and even that take place do NOT need to be 5-10 chapters long lol, not ever event is that important and shouldnt be drawn out for the word count.Fourth, (just a pet peeve of mine) i feel that the MC is very naive for no reason. Like not in the normal sense of the word but hes very easily influenced?? If that makes sense. Like, he sees some man fly, and freaks out and starts “respecting him” (even though this dude literally met GOD 5 seconds ago) I dont know it is just weird, this kind of stuff happens a lot. (Anyways, loving the story so far author, hope you dont do anything so outrageous that i end up dropping, youd be suprised how many times that happens)
well firstly I want to say that this novel is not good as expected. I have read about 40+ and my opinion is that it's not good. In the beginning chapters mc was dump by his girlfriend because he was fired from job and his girlfriend found another rich boyfriend, well nothing wrong in this plot but after he finishes his mission he gets a company and when he enters the company he see his ex girlfriend with his new boyfriend and she thought he is chasing after her and started bad mouthing him and also humiliate him then after she knows he rich she dump her new boyfriend and thinks that after she apologize to mc he will forgive, what kind of nonsense is this plz have some common sense you just humiliated him now thinks he will forgive you for an apology. And next he give a random girl an I phone just because he accompany him in the mall and not to mention she is a streamer who is just using you as you are rich, have some sense man. And in around 40+ chapter mc sells his 1% share which amount around 500 million to give 300million painting to a girls grandfather who asked her to pretend to be her boyfriend. and not to mention his family humiliated him , evaluating everything themselves that painting is fake and etcso in last plz make him a little selfish, isn't he too much selfless.
As an author myself, good job to you, I say. Not a big fan of gamelit/litrpg, but this work is of good quality. The writing quality is excellent, the characters are good, storyline is progressing very well and worldbuilding is on good ground. Keep it up, fellow author.
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