Might of will

Very detailed but concise when it comes to your description and narration. I wonder what kind of pen you are using to make an almost perfect "show, don't tell" rule in writing haha. This story is interesting, I'll gonna read it until the end if I have some time. keep it up.
ps. added to my lib

i got so wrapped up waiting for Kat's happy ending but i just kept getting more confused.. dont waste your coins

Shocked, Cyrus gathered all his strength on his legs and leapt forward away from his horse.