Really enjoyed this, partly because of how much I can relate to the first MC. What's weird was other than the novel in general I found the way you write really captivating, it was really seductive I guess? but the fact that you killed off the MC is extremely disappointing, He was one of the reason I was reading the novel other than the way you write. I probably won't continue reading this unless the MC somehow revives which is not likely since the guy with no balls and less interesting Character got a system. Either way the plot twists and fights were amazing. it's solid 5 or 4.9 but you know what happened for It to be 4.6, tbh I was curious about his memories of his late father but whatever.
author desperately tries to be funny but it goes wrong every time.MC is just machine that sleeps , nothing else. And this is a blatant copy of another novel .
Nonhuman characters are more interesting when the human souls don't go to great lengths to pretend they're still human. For example, this jellyfish mc doesn't need to sleep. Ever. Still, he stops every night not because it's dark or dangerous to move around but because he wants to maintain the routines of humanity. It slows him down. And when he's traveling somewhere to do something while he's completely alone it isn't interesting, it's idiotic. You don't need to maintain your humanity to such a degree you refuse to take advantage of your new nature. And as of chapter 11 he's long since left the ocean behind and it doesn't look like we'll be revisiting it now that religions and villages have been introduced(A development that happened way too quickly IMO. We only just started exploring the ocean floor). So this story isn't very adventurous nor do we have any reason to put the budding sea monster on a pedestal anymore. He just doesn't feel legendary or mysterious now that's he's less than 1% of his original size and about to straightforwardly introduce himself. - This review will be subject to change as I continue reading but I wanted to warn anybody getting their hopes up that this story only just barely represents it's Cthulhu namesake. Pretty much all you're getting is a big jellyfish. And judging from the mc's empathy towards people he's going to be a copout "evil god". So don't expect any mind-melting horrors, death flags for entire continents and worlds, alien minds and etc. Just note that my current problem with this story lies entirely with an mc I'm beginning to dislike. I've seen people mentioning this story used to have translation issues but I haven't noticed anything yet so you should be good to go if that's what you're worried about.
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I realize the power-scaling has become ridiculous here. I am going to make a new novel with a lot less nonsense. and a lot more sense. It's going to be a DND-Like modern world. but the character has a system.(the system won't be sentient. and it'll be very fanfiction.)
Sasama ba ko? Pero di ko naman ganon ka close si Radi. Yeah same school since High School hanggang SHS namin and same section lagi katulad nito ni Ciara dahil lagi kaming nasa star section pero di kami ganon ka close. Hindi ko din alam kung bakit. Mailap siya sakin at mailap naman ako sa tao. Si Ciara at Radi ang sobrang close pero mas close ata kami ni Ciara.
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