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  1. VainKiller
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    I like the system! Synopsis catches, in any case I want to see the first chapter. 8 chapters and more than 4 thousand views indicate that the novel is interesting, since so many people watched it! Especially the novel began to be published only on January 11!The beginning is humorous, and realistic! Of course in the morning traffic, everyone goes to work! If you know what else is "acne"?Old families? Would it be more detailed? Not aristocrats and not the bourgeoisie? Who then? Artisans? Masters? Workers? Employees? but then they don’t pull on old families ?! Maybe the peasants ?! They definitely have a lot of secrets and historical artifacts preserved! They are the salt of the earth! Someone from the classics said!The description of the third world nemngo resembles the Japanese anime "Higashi no Eden" by Kenji Kamiyama, whose name is a flip-flop of the classic novel by American writer John Steinbeck "East of Eden" (Wikipedia article).In the 21st century it is difficult to write something original, something original, most of the ideas have already been voiced by someone in their works.Government of the Earth? This is Star Trek, 1965! Honestly, it’s hard to imagine, even after 100 years, if you look at the modern world and the contradictions in it. Where world law is worth nothing. You can kill a person with the click of a finger sending a drone across the ocean. Some are allowed to have a nuclear weapon, while others are prohibited. It is hard to believe that people of different nationalities will be able to agree in just 100 years ?! Not realistic! But it’s probably fantastic, maybe common sense will work there, and ambitions and inter-friends will be a thing of the past?But 1 chapter per day with your good writing, and interesting content and this is apparently not raw but already edited text, this is really cool! Keep up the pace of the novel! My question is how many chapters will be approximately in the novel?I liked it, brought it to the library. I will read, since there is a system!Thanks to the author for such an interesting work, I hope to read another 50 chapters before the novel goes into premium mode ?!
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  1. samgorge
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    i feel like i have grown dumber after reading this....total cliche novel....and waste of time.......i simply wasted 1hr of my life  hoping it would get better after few chaps....how dumb of me
  1. hilmice
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    Hey Webnovelist!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email [email protected]  We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
  1. Dream_Seeker_729
    Dream_Seeker_729 rated it
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    .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. quite good i suppose...
  1. ElijahMartin9780
    ElijahMartin9780 rated it
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    Man, I have been waiting for this novel to be translated. I hope the translator will stay strong to the end and complete this novel. So far the translation has been very good.
  1. KangGalonNjZ
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    "Tapi adik saya sudah mau pulang dan saya harus menjemput mereka..... bisakah kalian tinggal disini sebentar sampai saya pulang nanti....?"
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