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Loving the story so far, please add more detail when you create your world. KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP IT UP!!!
I say this story is quite interesting. the actions are quite describe. the more i read it, the more i want for more. i really wished for this book to get popular soon enough. keep up the good work author.
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I really want to like it. It has the necessary ingredients, but it falls flat because the chef doesn't know what to do with them.There are so many words in every chapter, but nothing of importance is being said.I read 16 chapters and I've found myself skimming through most of it, as it was mostly pointless nonsense.And when there's suddenly something interesting going on, the POV suddenly switches to some random dude and his sister, or some random dudes drinking and talking about something. Don't know what, I just skipped past the whole thing.I don't think I'll continue reading past the first 20 chapters, unfortunately. It's all a convoluted mess and nothing makes sense. Driving the reader mad with gibberish is a great way for your readers to immerse themselves in your novel, but it's not for me.
NEGATIVE. I know it I am not her real daughter or the mother of Chunxi.I hide the dna result in the drawer and lock it safely.I faced the mirror what! Why ? I have the same face when I am alive? Are we twins or what? Maybe I should investigate this mystery.But this face is so ugly. Buy it only need a make over.I watch my hair it is blonde but with so many split ends and look like a witch!How is she treating herself😥.I felt sad if ever she is my other twin.But I will discover this mystery.I should do a make-over that bitch of bestie arranged a blind date without asking me.I know she was just mocking me.That she stole the boy friend of Chunxi.What a piece of trash!But where I can get some money for makeover?I scan this spacious room.Wow it's not so princess like room. But it is good pink room. A queen sized bed not so bad.I saw a phone in a drawer. It's good that there is no password I scan the phone and I log in the website that I was making for many years it was my drawings and sketches of dresses.Maybe I should do more design to earn some money for myself. Maybe I should asked some money to that aunt HAHAHA.I heed to the closet it was so out dated dress and dull colors. Maybe I should do some experiment. I see the scissor at the drawer.I should make this boring dress off shoulder. I cut the edges of the black dress.I scan it was ugly but I will improvise it.Once I was done I face myself and the dress to the mirror .Wow! I am so genius haha.I wore the dress and comb my hair.I face my self in the mirror . Chunxi is gorgeous the owner of this body. It just need some make over. I'm done I decided to go downstairs . As I was headed to the stairs I hear this bitch of a mother talking to a phone. She is talking to that Sheng Mee. Sheng Mee dear what is your plan to that bitch Chunxi that she is having a blind date . Are you going to plan her to get a notable boy friend? You shouldn't do that! Shengmee. Chill Mom I know what I am doing I will do this to ruin her reputation to everyone of how cheap she was. What a whore! Thinking that she can get some guy who will love her. In her dreams hahaha. I hear them talking so evil.Tsk! what a waste that I hear them maybe I should head downstairs.I was a black belter when I was studying in highschool. As I head down I see that this is a villa. With a chandiler not so big but beautiful. Maybe I should it the food in the table to get energy. I hear the tiktok of heels heading down. Aww Chunxi eat some so you get to be beautiful like Sheng Mee. I rolled my eyes. Mom can I get my monthly allowance now? She was shock to hear it. Maybe Chunxi never asked her some allowance. Chunxi why you dress like a whore. You should be copying like Sheng Mee in dressing.Mom I know what I am doing. So can you give me some cash? Yeah I will she said. Okay I give you 10 thousand . Is it okay? Yes mom it's okay I said. I took the money she handed me. Mom I will be strolling in mall so I will be late. What!? But you hate crowded places!? She was shocked as I scan her face.Yeah mom maybe for a change haha. Okay but you should not caught some trouble that face of yours. You have blind date tomorrow be on time. Sheng Mee will text you the place and the time was move. Okay mom! sure I said. I headed at the door and it was so beautiful outside with red rose and pink. Pity that there is living devil here.As I was out in the gate. I spot cab. I hurriedly get in. Sir can you get me to the mall in Shing Mall.Okay Maam the driver said.As I was watching outside the window I saw a handsome , black haired , white man but with a violet pair of eyes. He was driving the car. He see me staring at me and he smirk. I was horrified!
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