The death of the parents was to forced, and doesnt fit with the OP tag. With the OP tag i expect that i dont need to read any tragedies to befall on the MC. If you want to kill the parents with the hands of some random gangsters you shouldnt yse OP tag, but more like Weak to Strong tag
The story just contradicts itself when he gets back home. Their is just no common sense to this book later in the chapters. Sadly a good book has gone wrong in my opinion.
this is a really good story, the mc always shocks his foes with his new skills he achieved at a good speed. I want to see how strong he can get and get his revenge on Kyle
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