It's a decent read, but I got pulled out of the story a lot by the world, supposed to be a military school but there is zero discipline and pretty much the entire story plays out like "Lord of the Flys" with older kids/stronger kids deciding on the rules and punishments. All this is justified by this apparently making the weak kids want to get stronger so they sell themselves to the military to get resources, which in this world the global military that is fighting an technologically superior race, thinks that's how their going to win by holding power and privilege to a few people instead of you know, what a military actually values like discipline and team work. So anyway I quit at chapter 50, but if your looking for "slowish build vampire Lord of the flies high school". **. It's really not that bad, just fell short in a few too many places for me to continue.
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THIS is a very very good Read i really enjoy reading this and I am really excited to see the super powerd guilds and an explanation on what happened to old adam ? What is the deal with the book ?and why Young adam did not die? and what the real world is like
This novel is great! It’s not an apocalyptic system novel that’ll put you to sleep haha..updates are reallyyyy slow so just spam the author😈😈😈we will win‼️ anyways I still have stability of updates a 5 since its stable...at like one a month😭🥺
A well written story that is occasionally mired with grammatical errors, however they do not detract from the reading much. The setting of the story is interesting: it's an isekai with a prehistoric twist made possible with the help of cliff-kun (since trunk-san was on holiday). Some people might get triggered by the fact that the MC got cucked so soon in the plot, but it really is just setting the story and quickly gets shuffled away so don't judge the story and drop it so quickly. Again, there were some errors grammatically speaking, but it's not that bad. One thing that I think does need improving is the characters' description. For example, Night, the only thing I know about her is that she's got dark eyes, tanned, and has toned legs. That's it. Not much to go on. Other than that, there's not much else to complain about.Oh but there's one thing and this isn't the author's fault. It's just ... I was laughing with tears when I read the synopsis and even when reading parts of the story. I mean, in this setting - the prehistoric setting - were the girls really beautiful? I mean ... I don't think they had brushes so uh ... kissing is ... yeah. Then there's ... they barely had knives so no scissors or shears ... which means bushy outta control body hair. And I'm part of the shave/trim team so ... yeeaaahhh. But I digress. The point is, the story's good and give it a shot.
Uncommon world setting, has traditional xianxia elements but is still unique (not in a gimmicky way like systems) Translation quality could be better as pronouns sometimes get mixed up. Looking forward to more chapters
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