it’s not a bad novel, but the plot holes get bigger and bigger as the story progresses. The author seems to constantly forget his own explained powers and treasures all the time. Not to mention ridiculous oversights like the entire human population starving while being surrounded by sea life. He constantly forgets that there are spacial storage items and teleport formations around and often goes through “oh no, we can’t possibly ship all this food safely!” Or “oh, this army is trapped here and I can only travel in and out with about 50 people!” When a few dozen chapters prior he did things like store tens of thousands of people in his sleeves and a couple hundred chapters prior it was explained that there were many storage items that could hold an army for traveling through a portal around. Also the amount of times that ridiculous plot devices are used to prolong an enemy’s life by saving them over and over again, and the sheer ludicrously dumb decisions that the higher up people make about not removing an enemy when they have a chance to and instead leaving them in a place where they can steal most of the treasures of the world while massively improving their forces and wiping out humanity is just stupid.
Found where you can read it. Its a bit uncomfortable but its manageable. Also not sure if i can refer you there without my comment getting flagged by admin. Oh and the site is in Korean so you have to use the chrome auto-translate function which f*cks up some of the translation cos it translates it linguistically which is the inconvenience i mentioned cos some of the skills get misnamed and is kinda confusing.
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